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I'm back into writing Questers again! I've made some changes to the beginning of Terey Isabella, mostly to get the plot moving a little quicker.

Also, Briess... you're cut!

Briess: !WTF!!!!!!1!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!eleventyone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kayt: Sorry. Didn't want to cut ya, but then I remembered you don't actually serve the plot. You don't have any real thematic value. You were good for a laugh, and your sense of direction was phenomenal, but those are things I can get elsewhere. I'm sorry. It just wasn't meant to be.

Briess: Screw you, bitch! I'm gonna get my own novel! With blackjack! And hookers!

Here is a teeny little extract from Terey Isabella, just to make you say "Wow... she's working hard like a good little bunny."

And if you said that, you'd be telling the truth.

‘So, why did you murder that girl?’ asked Veronica.
    ‘It’s not murder if there’s a war.’
    I didn’t necessarily disagree with his general premise. ‘There isn’t a war,’ I said.
    ‘Isn’t there?’
    ‘Not much of a war,’ Ronnie said. ‘Just the two of you.’
    This made Garathan laugh. ‘That was what we generally call a battle. The war involves considerably more than two.’
    ‘Why haven’t we ever heard of this war, then?’ I asked.
    ‘I wouldn’t take it personally,’ Garathan said.
    ‘Who’s winning?’ asked Ronnie.
    Garathan gave me a very peculiar smile. ‘At the moment? I think we are.’
    ‘What are you fighting about?’ I asked, trying to ignore the uncomfortable feeling brought on by that smile.
    ‘Oh, this and that. But they started it.’
    ‘So it’s a mature war, then?’
    This received no reply at all, and for the time being, Veronica and I said no more about it.



( 4 comments! — Make Remark! )
Mar. 10th, 2007 11:06 am (UTC)
Garathan - that's an interesting name. It has a nice rhythm to it.

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Mar. 11th, 2007 12:40 am (UTC)
Thankyou. He's great.
Mar. 10th, 2007 10:21 pm (UTC)
Hurrah for getting back into Questers :-) And for mature wars. Out of curiosity, when did you originally start working on it?
Mar. 11th, 2007 12:39 am (UTC)
When I was 11.
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